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chapter 1 of my awesome story!!! (please comment on it. i would really appreciate the feedback, good or bad. thank you!)


Once upon a time there was a boy and a girl and they lived in a little village near the mountains. The boy and the girl grew up next door to each other and because of this, they were always together. They were best friends, and as they grew older, the boy and the girl soon fell in love. they both thought that since they had finally found true love, nothing could tear them apart. That is, nothing until the witch came.

at first, no one really thought of her as a witch, she was just the weird outsider. but soon, like in most places, rumors started to go around that she was a with, and because of these rumors, she was shunned. To get away from everyone, the witch went up to them mountains to live alone, and not be called a witch everyday. Little did everyone know, she really was a witch, and an evil one at that. When she went up to the mountains, she vowed that she would get her revenge on the villagers for what they all did to her. Maybe, since they all turned on her, she would have them turn onto one of their own. Yes, that would work, but who would she choose? She would have to find someone who knew a lot about the village and they had to be able t complete the tasks she asked, and also someone who would easily go under her control.

The witch started looking for this perfect vessel for her revenge. She searched and searched, and then, ah-ha! There he was! This boy, he was the one. The witch saw how he talked with the villagers, he deffinetly knew them all, that would help. She saw he worked in a little shop in the middle of the village and he could easily lift heavy things, also very helpful, she thought. But oh, what's thsi? This girl he's always with? it seems that they like each other. No, they are in love. Perfect! Anyone in love are the always the easiet to manipulate. This would be too easy. With her vessel all picked out, the witch went right to work with her plans of revenge.