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A Poet In Mind - By Dale Luck
Some poems by moi, and different kinds of poems (haikus, etc.)
POEM 23 - You're The Temptation

Your the temptation,
The apple in the tree,
The snake on the grass,
The one who'll kill me.

The feelings for you,
Are unknown to many,
Especially to the tramps,
Who get thrown a penny.

I thought I didn't like you,
But now I think I am wrong,
So to get these mixed feelings out,
I started to write this song.



I didn't ever finish this poem. It doesn't say when I wrote it, but on the file description it says 30/06/2006. I don't like this that much. I might finish it some time in the future.


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