Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
Whatever... I write when about my life when I'm bored
What the journal title says, I write about my life when I'm bored. Nothing else and nothing more.
Can you please tell me what you think of this?
It's some song lyrics I wrote last night around 11 and it took me about 20 minutes to write it. I don't really like it (no big surpise there) but I think it is my best so far. So please comment me on what you think and please make any suggestions on it, if needed.

A Letter From A Dead Shell

Thank you
Even at the bottom
You made me feel like I was walking higher then space
I hope I did the same
In some small impossible light
In the middle of the dark void
I'm sorry for all the wrongs
And please never abandoned me here
Where even the strongest ships drowned

I changed so much in so little time
Eveything went down hill
But you stayed true(I'm sorry)
You tried everything to make me smile again(I'm sorry)
But I just acted like a b***h(I'm sorry)
I just hope I can make it up one day
Through blood
Through tears
Through life

"How could you put up with me?"
The question shall always play through my head
Always until the roses wilt and die
But the roses still live in my memory
Like the good times we had
Is that the only thing that fueled you?
Or was that my only string to not leave
For the pain I forced?

I know the scars will never leave
I can't blame you if the pain is great
Just please don't stop smiling
Don't stop being true to yourself
Don't end up like me
The one who truly believed The Angels Of Death existed
And the only way to find comfort was to ignore thw whole world
I hope you can continue making everyone laugh
And that I can make up for all the years of killing it
By making you laugh with tears in your eyes and heart


The Land And Water
Community Member
  • [04/19/11 07:11pm]
  • [09/30/07 08:31am]
  • [06/04/07 08:53pm]
  • [05/31/07 10:30pm]
  • [04/05/07 01:55am]
  • [01/09/07 08:47pm]
  • [12/27/06 12:00am]
  • [12/03/06 12:17am]
  • [11/14/06 10:34pm]


  • User Comments: [16]
    pretty, pretty, shiny, shiny

    comment breanna coran · Community Member · Fri Jan 12, 2007 @ 12:33am
    Huh?

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Fri Jan 12, 2007 @ 12:52am
    i'm sorry. i know you don't like it when i say it, tis' why i said it twisted

    comment breanna coran · Community Member · Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 02:34am
    Oh thanks. rolleyes

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 01:40am
    crying you devon, (poet) devon! thats awesome! *licks thumb* gold star!

    that really is awesome. you gonna be a poet? seriously think about it.

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 03:03am
    Maybe.... I'm not sure..... It is kinda hard to always come up with stuff all the tine. confused I really want to do something in art like make a comic or cartoon. Or do video game design... I'm not sure yet. gonk

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 08:47pm
    well you got lots going fer yer! pirate aye ay! mcdonalds? stare yeah, okay! whatever you do, youll be rolling in money im sure! blaugh

    idea you could be a comic making video game designer... with tee shirts and poety in both!!!! mrgreen

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 10:24pm
    You got a lot going for you too! YOu can do something in video games, or you can do what you told me you wanted to do... I won't even try spelling it. sweatdrop

    OoooooOOoooooo Me like! How about you be the editor? My spelling and grammar is horrible. gonk

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Wed Jan 31, 2007 @ 11:20pm
    OoOoOoO! me like mooooore! i accept! (do i get knighted? O.o)

    lol, the only thing i got going for me is a career of grocery bagging and livng in a van. xD

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Fri Feb 23, 2007 @ 01:24am
    *gets a sword out* I dub thee, -sagax-, my editor! *puts sword on shoulder, flat side down* You have now been knighted as my editor!

    I'll join you in that van! But you probably won't get a job as a grocery bag person. Your too smart for that!

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Mon Feb 26, 2007 @ 01:04am
    yay! im not alone! and you can help me pay my rent for the van! those rent-a-car places are so expensive. xp and lol, no, im too lazy to think and a career and none of them interest me. i like to pack stuff in bags though. razz or carts! and im a slow learner at anything practical and manual. so there! suck it! blaugh but enough about my greatness. talk2hand yes, yes, i know im awesome, but really, im modest. neutral

    *cries in honor of being dubbed* crying i wish leo were here to see this, but he just died in the Great War. ;_;

    oh, so now you get violent on me?! you slapping me good ole shoulder with the flat of yon blade?! gonk crying emo

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Fri Mar 02, 2007 @ 11:29pm
    w00t! Rent-a-car is too high class for my likings talk2hand But still! Get a job where people just go to complain to you and you pretend to listen and care. That job sounds easy. Or you could do small drawings for comics or something. You don't have to be an amazing artitst to become a comic maker. Only if you have orginal story line and interesting characters does it truely make it great!

    That is how your knighted!!! Didn't you know that?

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 12:43am
    PSHA! talk2hand you are SOOOO midevil. (SP?) that kind of knighting is SO 5 minutes ago, git wiff it girl! scream

    lol love that career plan! xd for comic career id be good at ideas, but im horrible at drawing cartoon style or anime style. emo you'd be good at both! razz ( stressed )

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 10:54pm
    Anyone would probably be good at it! Just draw in a way that makes you feel most comfortable. razz

    So what if I am midevil!? I'm proud to use the gullitone(sp?)! It's so bloody and pretty! *_*

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 10:58pm
    quick! to the couseling and career center! you need an upgrade, now they have transferables called chainsaw! theyll be like, omg, whats wrong with ya?!

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 01:42am
    NO! Those people scare me at times and I hate it when people think "Oh no! Your depressed? Talk to an adult about it! They can help!" Wrong for me. I have a hard time trusting adults that way because imedatitly they call the parents and I never want then to know.

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 08:17pm
    User Comments: [16]

     
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum