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Whatever... I write when about my life when I'm bored
What the journal title says, I write about my life when I'm bored. Nothing else and nothing more.
Scary Poem?
I created this poem for English and one the teachers who read it said it was scary. We had to creat a poem about something we lost and had to be in style of one of Edgar Allan Poe's poems. I really disagree with the teacher that the poem os scary. I also think it makes no sense to what I lost. Points to who ever figures it out. xp

The Vampire's Book

Tick Tock Tick Tock
The time has come to run and hide
Look for the place where the book hides
The vampires come out like the thieves
Looking for the book about their lives.

The police come to stop the blood sucking dead
The place is England, to the South
All have failed to the vampire's dance
One will become dead, but still will change
The hero is still dead.

The one who became dead joined the hero's side
Even if he's dead
Learned her new powers
The sight and fear of light
She will never become full until she drinks the red.

The book still lost
Never to be found
They shall never learn about their lives
But one shall remember all their lives
Until the sun rises up.

If anyone figures out what I was writing about, I congratulate you. xp


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  • User Comments: [2]
    surprised wow, that was freaking awesome! scary? xd is your teacher skitzophernic? rofl i get the poem meant literally! that was really good! maybe she thinks you're a vampire..? 4laugh your title is renewed!!!

    if you meant it figuritively, did you mean about like how people eat away at you and people join their side to seek power??? whatever i was, it was pretty clever! 3nodding domokun

    or did you mean how people make sacrifices for others and try to find meanings in their lives? sweatdrop im not very good at poem diciphering...

    comment -sagax- · Community Member · Wed Dec 06, 2006 @ 02:22am
    It's not deep at all. It looks deep when it's not. Since I already told you, don't tell anyone. I'm waiting for someone else to figure it out without my help.

    comment The Land And Water · Community Member · Wed Dec 06, 2006 @ 06:54pm
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