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The end is near...
sitting there in silent darkness
waiting for the night to end
searching for the lost and hopeless
i open my wounds for them to mend
thay kick and bite and do what they can
i dont know why they need to fight
i just want a little comfort
in this cold, neverending night.
the darness creeps about me
filled with hellish fiends
they are the ones who come to me
and embark about my dreams
the seldom souls of loved ones
the dead ones, the despaired
have all tread to far in darkness
their sight and love impared
the darkness rests inside them
it makes them unclean inside
soon the light is lost from them
and in darkness, the soul abides
they come to me in sickness
in fear, in doubt
but really all i need
is to be with them without
the soulless face of strangers
the faces of regret
cant see the fiends around them
causing living heck
only one who treads
in darkness and in light
can hope to save these underserving souls
from total obliterating night
I must be the one
who gives this hope a soul
and hopefully, in time
this world i shall controll
So when you belittle the child
who sits in darkness for so long
remember this well
and you shant do him wrong
with his hands he will fight for you
and he may not win the fight
but in times of crisis and need
he will always do you right
never shall he stray fomr dark
never into light
for him. there is no sun, only
Everlasting Night.



Well? Watcha think? I thoought it was preety good as i wrote it...hey, comment! ^^



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EyaniCarea
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 04, 2006 @ 04:38am
^^ i like i like. twas very good. my latest is the first thing you read when you go on my profile... though you may not like it... v_v


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 05, 2006 @ 04:28am
hey wolfie, that was really deep, I like, it flowed very nicely and made me think alot! nah i don't like it I LOVED IT....hehehe got cha there for a secound!



X-HelloKittie-X
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dark_felix16
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 25, 2006 @ 03:31am
That Was very deep...................while at the same time calming, like forgetting everything letting yourself go. sweatdrop oh away 2 thumbs up


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