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oh and heres the latest one that most of my offline realworld friends think is real good and makes the most sense out of all of them so far and it's called

The Melody of a Dying Artist

This old-fashoned pen
has run out of ink
so i pour my own blood into the sink and bleed the rhymes
upon the wall
as a stranger grins at me
from down the hall

Like history that has been
writen in stone
the future isn't left alone
so follow the plot of the story
because you need to know the truth

In a dream thoughts are portrayed
as actions while actions
are portrayed as a sceme
and never go alone with the theme
so solidify the memory
and play along with what has come to be

These pastel bullets
dig into my skin
I know your hiding deep within the walls
cause they can't kill by themselves

Like the burning anger
that engulfs me in flames
my fate is sort of unclear
my destiny"s to blame

The flames are dying out
you need to feed them fast
sacrifice some lives
that should make them last

Bit by bit you want to quit
but the story hasn't begun
you've killed so many patrions
you've killed your only son
you feel so guilty to kill yourself properly
use a gun

This old-fashoned pen
has run out of ink
Like history that has been
writen in stone
In a dream thoughts
are portrayed as actions
Like the burning anger
that engulfs me in flames

So lock me in a room
and throw away the key
erase me from existence
detonate the memory
the explotion creates a mist
setting the mood for
The melody of a dying artist...

so what did you think of that one eh...pretty good? tell me what you think of that one