I did some editing to the poem so it would fit for my English assignment and here is the new and improved My Immortal
~*My Immortal*~
Would you be the same
If you were here with me?
Would you care about
What I do and say?
I tried so hard,
To make you happy
To satisfy your needs
Yet you
Left me hanging
I know it's my problem
For the emotions that I let out
For the troubles these emotions cause.
But could you be
Just a bit nicer?
Just a bit caring?
I know you blame me
For everything that happened
For the pain and suffering you felt
The anger and frustration
I could have done better
To protect you
But your indifference
But your coldness
Held me back.
I regret these mistakes.
If they never happened
You'd still be here
Right beside me
With maybe, just maybe
A hint of a smile
A twinkle of happiness
I love you
I truly do
So as my apology
I will pay
With what I have
The only thing I have
ME.
I would love to
Go to the same place
That you are now
The place where all is pure,
Just like you
I wish for that.
I really do.
My love...
My Immortal...
Wait for me...
Forever...
Would you be the same
If you were here with me?
Would you care about
What I do and say?
I tried so hard,
To make you happy
To satisfy your needs
Yet you
Left me hanging
I know it's my problem
For the emotions that I let out
For the troubles these emotions cause.
But could you be
Just a bit nicer?
Just a bit caring?
I know you blame me
For everything that happened
For the pain and suffering you felt
The anger and frustration
I could have done better
To protect you
But your indifference
But your coldness
Held me back.
I regret these mistakes.
If they never happened
You'd still be here
Right beside me
With maybe, just maybe
A hint of a smile
A twinkle of happiness
I love you
I truly do
So as my apology
I will pay
With what I have
The only thing I have
ME.
I would love to
Go to the same place
That you are now
The place where all is pure,
Just like you
I wish for that.
I really do.
My love...
My Immortal...
Wait for me...
Forever...
