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basically whatever i feel like talking about that day. some may be boring but othersmay interest you. i also may put poem i make, songs i like, or even some of my art in there. we'll have to see.
My FanFic- The Ghost's Side Story Chapter 1
Okay this is Soni's first fan fic and its based off of the Ghosts RPG (made by thee Dudet). Well the story has grown and so has the RP. I mean there is even a second generation! Anyway, I'm going to edit this in the future. There are more chapters and they get longer so don't worry if you find this a tad short. I may make short bios of the characters so you know their ages, roles, and such. This is kind of a...well...how was it described?

Two thirds drama and one third comedy filled with romance and stirred up with magic

Hope ya'll enjoy


.:Intro:.


Along time ago, there was a huge and happy kingdom. But, with that came a very vain queen. When the king died the queen hired sorcerer's and mages of all kind to help her bring him back, when they failed she would make them her servants. The Queen became obsessed with her beauty and with others. The Kingdom became very unhappy.

On one cold night there was a knock on the palace doors. The lady asked the servant to fetch the queen and when he did Diamond was disgusted. She looked very old and was quite ugly. The woman didn’t give her name but asked to stay in the palace for the night. The queen refused and sent the woman away, but before she left, she gave the queen a package, wrapped in silver paper with blue ribbon. When the Queen opened the box, she was quite pleased. In the box was a mirror a very beautiful silver mirror, lined with gorgeous gems and a touch of gold. When the queen looked in it she thought she looked more ravishing with every glance. So she put the mirror in her room and wouldn’t let anyone look in it but her.

One night, when she was looking at herself in the mirror, her reflection grew pale and hair whitened. She backed away from the mirror, but the image seemed to only get closer and it reached its hand through the mirror. The queen screamed and the mirror shattered.


That’s when the worlds connected

After that, no one has seen or heard from the queen. Most said she was dead due to her long absence, so her son took over the throne. Since that night, rumors have spread and been flying about. People looking in mirrors and seeing their own ghost and that things are moving around or floating in mid air. Some can even hear the cries of someone that’s not there.



Chapter 1: A New Average Day


It all began in the Kingdom of Altara. It was a beautiful prosperous country that had been dragged down with inner conflict. Slowly it tries to rise again to its former glory, fearing the night and ghosts that were called figements of their imagination

Prince Troy quietly got out of bed, yawning softly. His eyes were dull, a quiet pain still in them at his mother's disappearance and his father's death. Meanwhile Lila is already up and heading downstairs to get the prince and princess breakfast. Of course, Crystal and Ryokka were already up making breakfast.
“I wish we didn’t have to get up so early,” Crystal says with a yawn.
Ryokka laughs, “I don't mind. I’ve always been like an early bird anyway.”
“Really?” Crystal replies, “Bet those worms are just delicious.”

Lila stretches her arms before entering the kitchen to get the breakfast for Jewel and Troy upstairs. The two chefs offer to help but Lila insists she’ll be fine carrying them up. Once upstairs she knocks a Jewel’s door twice and put the tray of food on the floor. Jewel quickly answered the door then looked down to see the tray of food.
“Your up early,” Lila replies not expecting her to be up “Did you have a good rest?”
Jewel nodded “Uh-huh”
“Good. Please try to eat it all. The chefs put good effort to make it.”
“Okay. I’ll try,” Jewel replies with a smile.
As Jewel sits on her bed, she laughs a bit, “This is one of momma’s favorite breakfasts. I wonder when she’s coming back.”
Lila headed to Troy’s room, again knocking twice and leaving the tray on the floor in front of the door. She then heads to her room, still tired and forgetting to get herself something to eat for the morning.

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Crystal begins eating her breakfast while Ryokka washes dishes. Taking her last bite she starts playing with her fork.
“Lila forgot breakfast again,” Crystal mumbles to herself
Ryokka turns around drying a glass, “Should we give her her breakfast?”
Crystal sighs, “Nah, she’s probably sleeping by now.”
Then Ryokka takes Crystal dishes and heads back to the sink. Being kind of a clutz she falls. Crystal jumps up from where she was sitting and catches the falling plate but the coffee mug shatters.
Ryokka remains on the floor, “Why am I so clumsy…?”
“Eh, get up. We gotta sweep this up before anyone heads into the kitchen.”
“…I guess…”

Jewel was heading downstairs, only stepping on every other step. She jumps onto the ground from the stairs and quickly heads into the kitchen. She blinks finding their only two chefs working their sweeping up blue glass.
“Whatcha doing?” Jewel asks not caring who replied
Crystal gives a smirk “Eatin’ Chocolate.”
“No your not…” Jewel replies with a small frown, confused.
Crystal laughs, “You don't get it. It goes like this:
‘Whatcha doin’?’
‘Eatin’ Chocolate’
‘Where’d ya get it?’
‘Doggy dropped it’
‘Where’s the doggy?’
‘At the door’
‘What’s he doin’?’
‘Makin’ more’.”

“Ewww!” Jewel said giggling a bit
Ryokka laughs, “Where’d you get that from.”
“My brother told me it. Funny thing is I had the same reaction as Jewel,” Crystal says with a laugh.

Jewel leaves the kitchen going back up to her room to play. Crystal smiles and continues to sweep, “Such a sweet girl.”
Ryokka nodded, “I know. Hey after we clean up wanna make something?”
“Why not? What is it?”
“Almond Jelly!”
“How do you make it?” Crystal asks
“Dunno…” Ryokka says with a shrug, “My mom used to make it when I was a kid though.”
“Hey I have a recipe book. I'm sure it’s in there.”

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Lila comes out of her room, ‘Troy hasn’t come out of his room at all this week…I hope he’s okay.’She then walks down the hall and goes to Troy’s door. She lifts her fist to knock only to hesitate, ‘It would be rude to disturb him. I mean what if he isn't awake yet’
Realizing the food tray she put on the floor was gone, she immediately knew he wasn’t sleeping and was eating breakfast. Unless he was just trying to pretend he ate and skip breakfast again.
Lila finally knocks “T-Troy? Um, do you need anything?”
Troy looks to the door only to look back to his tray, cutting another piece of French toast. He swallowed and cleared throat, “No…nothing at all.”
Lila sighs looking at the floor, hands clasped together. She wanted to help him, make him happy even but how? She stands there for a bit before slowly walking away.
Troy looks up from his plate, “Lila?”
“Y-yes?” she replies quickly turning her head.
“C-could you…I mean…ah, never mind.”
“Are you sure?”
She doesn't hear the reply. She clenches her fists feeling utterly useless ‘Surely there is more I can do…If Troy doesn't take role as King, Altara will…fall. Why can’t he rea-‘. She stops noticing Jewel walking out with her tray.
Lila takes the food tray for her “I’ll take that for you miss.”
“Why does everyone call me ‘miss’? Isn't my name Jewel?” Jewel replies a bit confused
“Well of course but by calling you ‘miss’ is showing respect. When you get married people will start calling you ’Mrs.’”
“Why?”
“Again just showing respect.”

Jewel follows her to the kitchen where she sees the two chefs talking amongst themselves; Ryokka washing dishes and Crystal swept.
Ryokka smiles, “Wow. It tastes just as good as my mom’s cooking.”
Crystal also cracks a grin letting her hands rest on the tip of the broom and her chin rest on her hands, “Glad you like. I bet Troy and Jewel would like to sample…if only we could get Troy out of his room…”
“Ya,” Ryokka sighs, “Oh are you going to the parade? I hear there’s gonna be a cooking contest. You should really enter.”
Crystal rolls her eyes, “Nah. Besides I'm busy. Got stuff to do.”
“What?”
“Just stuff. Gotta buy more supplies and such…Stuff like that.”
“Oh. Well if you get the time you should go.”
“I’ll think about it.”
Crystal honestly didn’t want to go to the parade. Not tomorrow at least. It was more of a day of morning to her…the day she lost everything.

Jewel shows a excited child-like smile “There’s going to be a parade! Lila can I go! Pleeeeeeeeease! With a cherry on top!”
Lila puts the tray away and the dishes in the sink, “Ryokka aren’t you going?”
“’Course!” Ryokka replies clapping her hands together
Lila nods, “Then you wouldn’t mind talking Jewel with you right?”
Jewel begins to speak only to be cut off “But L-“
“Sure. I don't mind.”

Jewel crosses her arms. She hated being disregarded or left out even in the adults’ conversations. It wasn’t fair. Just then Crystal’s eyes glisten as if she just had another crazy plot. No, crazy isn’t the word. Random maybe? She lifts her head “Eh, guys I got an idea!”
Before anyone could say ‘What?’ Ryokka trips over the broom Crystal was using. She hits a bucket, which gets sent hurling into the air, hitting the bottom of the cabinets. A sack of flour falls turning Crystal and Ryokka into two white ghosts.
Crystal’s eyes narrow, “I believe that’s what…5?”
“9 actually…”, Ryokka mutters her face turning bright pink.
Crystal mutters something under her breath. Jewel laughs and Lila covers her mouth to hid her smile and muffle her giggle. Lila then clears her throat “Crystal? What exactly…is your idea?”
Crystal was still trying to pat the flour off herself but turned to Lila, a wily grin appearing, “We’re getting Troy out of his room.”

Commentary On Chapter 1~}

Soni: So what do you guys thinking
Snow: I'm lovin' it! My dream is coming true! 8D *ish ghost so only few see her*
Lila: Um...okay but about Crystal's idea...
Crystal: I do get good ideas you know ~_~
Lila: I-I didn't say you didn't ^^;
Ryokka: Where are we?
Snow: thee closet! aka CLO-set. aka Clueless Love Operation set ^^
Soni: Um...a closet
Crystal: Why?
Soni: I dunno. Make me a smoothie.
Crystal: You cant tell me what to do! D<
Soni: Do it and I'll make your life worth while in the future
Crystal: whatever -__-
Snow: Soni I got some ideas on that worth while part
Soni: So do I...Did you install them?
Snow: in every room. even where the water flows ^^
Soni: Good...hehe >]
Lila: Uh-no
Crystal: Wait...those cameras weren't your packages...right?



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Wed Feb 27, 2008 @ 10:32pm


oooo soni made a fan fic =0

nice wink


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