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VOID The emptiness I fell without you is unbearable. I loath your warmth and compassion. The blood I've shed is in the quarts. The tears I've cryed would fill the oceans and saturate the land washing the scum of the world away to it's death. The pain I fell is bone crushing...and yet you are somewhere loving someone else......that is the love I have longed for instead of my emptiness being filled it is being deepened. And I have this void in my life and bump in my road to happiness and your the cement that will smooth out my journey to self tranquity

Posted by: Do You Beleave In God Thu Sep 27, 2007 @ 12:00am

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Commented on: Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 10:15pm


	Luff your poems, Tiff! Despite the fact that they're meant to display your pain, I really think that they are deep and quite intellectual. It reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe-we're studying him in English-because every last one of his poems and stories were misery-filled. And a number of them were of the "Red Death"-or Tuberculosis, which three loved ones died from. And that's another similarity between you and Poe, I mean, both of you write of loved ones, or you know, things you cherished, and still manage to make them bitter and interesting at the same time. Overall, I think your writing style is rather complex for your age, because most students will just try to rhyme everything and use that same monotone kind of voice when they are recited. Behalten Sie auf dem Schreiben von mehr, kann ich auf das nächste nicht warten! =D

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