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In the bitter cold, I take a turn, onto a different path, that has changed my life, and who I am. Staying aware, of the danger around me, always looking back. A big change has happened, I am not the same person, I am a different person, a change person. Crunch,tap, crunch, Running in a field of leaf, to nowhere land, keeping a steady pace. Gasping for air, as if I am about to die, struggling to get free, from all this stress, and anger. The leaf dancing, birds singing, crickets making a beat, the night isn''t silent, where i'm at. Feeling scared and alone, misty cold air blows on my face, I site under a tree, wondering, why I took path. Finding my way back, from a long hard time, with a blacken heart, without a tear. I see a light ahead, smiling there might be hope, who knows, life passes by fast, things could change in seconds. The world seems to get darker, I look at things different, making more wiser chooses, being more careful, always staying on top if your game. Slacking isn't a option, not with this drama, and how things are. Badump, my heart beats, slish, slash, I scream with pain, as if I was stab. Easly wounded my life is changing again, taking another turn, onto another path, what will happen next.

Posted by: Ravens_Inner_Soul Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 07:08pm

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Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 08:17pm


	sad Aw Fred. It was really good but it makes me sad.

Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 09:09pm


	well it is kinda how my life goes sad

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Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 11:37pm


	wow thats good!! smile 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 11:43pm


	thanx ^.^ thi s didn't take long to write

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Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 01:22am


	i like it keep up the good work

Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 01:24am


	Thanx I will do my best to keep up the good work lol

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Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 03:16am


	wow this is a greeat poem i loved it keep up the good work ur really good at this poem writing ur like my opposite hehe when i write my poems mine rhyme and when u do it u just free write good job

Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 02:49pm


	lol ya I can't rhyme worth crap inless I am making a rap because I am thinking differently lol

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Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 06:21pm


	cry Well now that makes me even sadder. You poor thing hugs

Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 06:32pm


	aww bob I didn't want to make you sad :O "hug"

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Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 10:03pm


	It's ok Fred. I'm happy now biggrin see happy. Beng happy is cooler anyway@

Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 11:24pm


	YAY!!!!!!

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