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The lost soul( just a poem for people who feel alone)
Through your eyes,
I see hate,
blood seeping through,
nothing but hate.
Filled with rage,
everything inside of you ripping apart,
the world looking down at you in disgrace.

You lay there crying,
drowning in your own tears,
everything hurting you,
you fall to the ground in agony.

Screaming at the world,
tears turn into blood,
everything spinning,
doleful, alone in this world,
bye your self, giving up on everything.

You lay there crying,
drowning in your own tears,
everything hurting you,
you fall to the ground in agony,
hating everyone with a passion.

Feeling as if your time is up,
from the abuse you have taken,
feeling weak,
can't get up,
no, no, NO!!!!!
Just get up,not now.

You lay there crying,
drowning in your own tears,
everything hurting you,
you fall to the ground in agony.

Coughing up blood,
no one there to help you,
you tryed your hardest,
your darkened soul,
with no heart left,
wishing you wheren't here.

Left Invisble,
no one to turn to,
for love and care,
to wipe away your tears,
to make you feel special.
Instead your left on a corner,
Nothing but a gun.

You lay there crying,
drowning in your own tears,
everything hurting you,
you fall to the ground in agony.

On the ground,
with a gun in your hand,
lifless with no more worries,
your darken soul resting in peice,
living a new life,
as on your grave there lays a black rose.

You lay there crying,
drowning in your own tears,
everything hurting you,
you fall to the ground in agony.






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minosborn
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 01:17am
kinda dark but its good


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 01:20am
lol I know but alot of people deel like that and some of did things that alot of people wish they didn't do



Ravens_Inner_Soul
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 03:21am
WOW this is a powerfull poem and if u ever feel that way you know im always here for you, b/c u remember when i wasnt feeling really good just felt like sh!t you were there to help me and ill be here to help you


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 02:47pm
I rember good thing I don't feel like that XD



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Elie101_forever
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 06:24pm
I've felt like that before. sad It's a horrible feeling. It may be a dark poem but hey, thats the world.


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 06:30pm
well Bob if you ever feel like that again pm me buddy , I wouldn't want you to do something regrateful.


XD the way Iw rote the poem you coukd turn this into a song



Ravens_Inner_Soul
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Wario_man
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 09:00pm
That's really good. I think I'll have to parody it later on. Prepare for The Last Roll


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 10:01pm
Thanks Fred. smile Good to know you always got my bad. And just knoe I have yours too. smile

XD Oh yes it can be turned into a song!!! Hey maybe it will any you'll be famous! lol



Elie101_forever
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Ravens_Inner_Soul
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 10:47pm
hahahaha yesh bob I will be famouse lolz


thanx wario smile


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 11:11pm
Yup yup yup! When your famous please remember me!



Elie101_forever
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Ravens_Inner_Soul
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 11:14pm
I will bob ^.^ me want for get the Bobonator lol


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 11:16pm
XD lol Well the bobonator is glad the Fredonator won't forget her. lol



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