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FIRE!!!!!

	Storm
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Storm Drift along the Ocean, Everything seems so Perfect. A constant rocking Motion, Everything seems so Perfect- Until the Storm. Waves are Continuously, Crashing down upon me. Awaken from my Sleep, Fall into the lonely Deep. No one comes to Me, No one can find Me. Can it truly Be? Can anyone See? I'm lost Forever, Swallowed by the Sea. I'm lost Forever, Sinking for what seems to be Eternity. Wash upon the Shore, Everything seems so Peaceful. Never could have wanted More, Everything seems so Peaceful- And I am Free. Rising from the Earth, Forgetting the past and excepting Rebirth. Swirling through Space, Leaving without a Trace. And I am Free. [hi]_hacking_helpers · Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 04:04am · 9 Comments


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	cry Your poem is sad. I am going to talk to you through pm. Now. goes to start pm I hope you will be free. I felt free when I slipped and fell down the stairs today. Except that was painful. eek Offline mavi_raya16 · Community Member · Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 04:25am


	How come I'm the only one who commented on this? Offline mavi_raya16 · Community Member · Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 12:40am


	Because people are stupid and they won't read my work of art. Offline [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 01:10am


	We've read it. I always feel awkward commenting on your poems though....I feel like I'm intruding your personal thoughts or something.... I have a question about it, though. Maya says it's sad, but I thought the end seemed rather uplifting....what had you had in mind when you wrote it? Offline the silver fire · Community Member · Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 04:31am


	I know. I the ending since it isn't so depressing. I don't really know what I was thinking about. I just saw the rain outside, and the words just came to me. Instantly. It was actually pretty cool... Offline [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 03:24am


	Rain always seems to inspire me. I came home today after the walk home and actually started writing...nature is a good thing to look for for creative help. I like the poem, and the ending! Offline the silver fire · Community Member · Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 04:13am


	Thanks! Offline [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 04:55am


	I thought it was really really good!!! But all of a sudden it was done and i read it over and over trying to find the true meaning behind the words. (saying this for Downey incase he stalks me) But i couldnt it was such a creative peace. (the first sentence was completely true) Offline My Shirt Is Not Vintage · Community Member · Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 12:58am


	Change your damn journal already, ya poopbrain. Harrumph. Offline the silver fire · Community Member · Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 04:02pm

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