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FIRE!!!!!
My poem-Waiting
A poem I made just now. I got the sudden inspiration from what's been happening in my life. Could be a song for Misery Loves Company (if we ever get together) also. I don't know. Just read.....

"Waiting"

Waiting,
Waiting by the door.
Calling,
Calling but unheard.

How I long to see your eyes.
How I long to hold you in my arms.
This whole year of
Deceiving, Crying, Wishing-
I wish you were mine.

Chained,
Chained to the ground.
From which fear,
I am bound.
Falling,
Falling from so high.
I’m so sick of this lie.

Hoping,
Hoping that you’ll understand.
Reaching,
Reaching for your untouchable hand.

For I miss you so much.
Even though you are so close.
This whole year of
Deceiving, Crying, Wishing-
I wish you were mine.

Chained,
Chained to the ground.
From which fear,
I am bound.
Falling,
Falling from so high.
I’m so sick of this lie.

Breaking,
Breaking through my chains.
Rebelling,
Rebelling against this reign.


And now I run to you,
Time to tell you the truth.
All about that whole year of,
Deceiving, Crying, Wishing-
Wishing you were mine!


Free,
Free from my prison.
For which love,
Is my reason.
Rising,
Rising high so high.
I’m getting so sick of this lie.

Cause I’m rising
Oh, rising up so high,
Flying soaring,
Through the sky.
Free ,
Yes, free from the prison I’ve made,
And now you are saved.
Saved!

I’m finished with this lie.


I'd like to dedicate this to Emma, the love of my life. I don't know what I'd do without you.


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  • User Comments: [6]
    Aww! That's so sweet!!! redface

    comment Midnight Treat · Community Member · Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 03:16am
    Thanks Emma. I wanted to express my feelings for you through art. I think maybe I'll use it for the Literary Magazine at school too.

    Not for the school. For you.
    I won't tell who it's between because well......I don't want the school to well.....you know how stupid people are...

    comment [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 03:28am
    More deression.... neutral

    comment Kookie Monsda · Community Member · Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 12:53pm
    CLAIRE!!! IM SO PROUD OF YOU!!! YOU'RE MAKING REALLY SWEET POEMS!! Sorry, I'm being weird. But i really do love it, good luck with whatever your plans are. wink 3nodding 4laugh

    comment mavi_raya16 · Community Member · Mon Oct 23, 2006 @ 11:35pm
    "deresion" are you serious? You idiot!! It's DEPRESSION!!!!!!!!!! SHEESH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    comment [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 05:56pm
    Stop giving me cute faces whenever I express my feelings, Maya. You always think that everything is so cute. As cute as it might be, whenever you do that, it just gets me embarassed! redface

    comment [hi]_hacking_helpers · Community Member · Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 05:57pm
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