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Grey Rain
from
A Grey Sky
...
I fear I've fallen farther than you can go
beyond the taste of hope
or your loving light
I'm sitting here, at the bottom of this place
shivering and scared
the walls are oh, so high
and I cannot go on, I have not the strength to fly
for no wings would carry me
I am broken, and my heart too heavy
bloody pieces of myself are scattered on the floor
I shut my eyes
and try to think of you
but still, the pain comes seeping in
the crimson regrets
of my sad attempts
pool around me, like blood and I'm afraid I may drown
in my own failures
and long, forgotten dreams
can't you see my pain? it runs from me like tears
to mingle with the blood
to swallow me whole


lynsae4
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  • User Comments: [4]
    Ooooooo..............wow, I like this one, it's very good and constructed well

    comment Callie616 · Community Member · Mon Feb 13, 2006 @ 04:16am
    YAY thanks call-bug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! biggrin

    comment lynsae4 · Community Member · Tue Feb 14, 2006 @ 02:36am
    That one is good now that I think about there is not one of your poems that doesnt have a meaning.

    comment chesire8 · Community Member · Mon Feb 20, 2006 @ 06:03am
    lol, i try

    comment lynsae4 · Community Member · Sun Feb 26, 2006 @ 05:56am
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