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eTERnAL
Mood ~My headache blocks out everything, how sweet it is too...~
Music ~Something in my head that I might have heard on the radio~


<center>The things before me blur
And can't make out the faces
Nothings making sense
I feel like drowning
I
Want
To
Let
Go
But I can hear something
Everyone walks by me
I feel so alone inside
The trees pull me in
I
Wont
Come
Out
Again
Does everyone want to die
A pretty white coffin
But a scowl on their faces
Make them forsaken
Tears
Do
No
Good
Now
They want to believe so badly
I think they're mad
So they condemn me
I'd rather live in Hell
You
Foolish
People
Why
?
I asked a simple question
One that is so natural
But they look at me and frown
What a godless child I am
Will
You
Forgive
Me
If
I'm
Good
Redemtion is overrated
Who cares when everyone is dead?
So spend your lives foolishly
I'll bring you before the judgment
And
Then
We'll
See
Your
Truth
Answers bring more questions
Can you withstand me?
Evasions are such petty things
And I can see you hide
The
Fire
Burn
Me
Quick
Do you despise me so?
Would you like to understand
But you'll have none of it
Just leave me to die
And
I
Am
Left
With
.
.
.
.
.
.
~
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  • User Comments: [7]
    My goodness! xp

    comment Happy0 · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 03:35pm
    It seems you favor to isolate certain words in certain stanzas. It's a pattern that I've noticed in most of your poems.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 09:29pm
    Yeah xp I'm not sure if I do it to stress those words or just to brake up the blah of a long page of same length phrases...I don't usualy like using spaces cuz i kinda consider them "getting off subject" sweatdrop

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Mon Nov 22, 2004 @ 04:23am
    That makes sense. 3nodding

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Wed Nov 24, 2004 @ 04:11am
    Really? I'm surprised anything I say can makes sense... sweatdrop

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 12:08am
    Sometimes you don't with me...I never can follow what you were saying. It's like the sun trying to have a conversation with the moon. But amazingly, I did get what you were saying this time. 3nodding

    I think you might be rubbing off on me.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 07:22am
    Wow...and here I thought that it was YOU rubbing off on ME! eek sweatdrop xp

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Mon Nov 29, 2004 @ 04:21am
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