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Abstract Expressionism...Phear the angst....
mood ~happy happy way dead~
music ~The Rolling Stones on 96.9 The Eagle~

<center>Moonshine boy
Your eyes reflect the night sky
Like the water far below
I wish I knew your inner thoughts
Inside I know you're hurting

Reflecting sigh
Wont you please just let me in
I thought you knew me better
I'd turn you inside out if you would let me
Return to the sun side

The dark, O how I know you
Your cruel touch is the end
Laughing you mock my failure
How hard it is to know you

O Moonshine boy
How I love to to the end of ends
The warmth of my existance
You are the one that holds my sweet lost
So much better then my dreams

Mirror sunbright
Let me leave your watchful armlength
Tender your harsh mercy
You remind me of too much I thought I'd lost
It hurts more then I care to feel

O you seem like a dream
So enticingly real
Yet incomplete

O remind me why I wait
Here alone on this forgotten spit of land
It hurts to go
It hurts to wait
You cruel desire
I cannot let you go
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  • User Comments: [5]
    Nice poem, I think every one has a relationship something like that. At least that's what I like to beleive. domokun STONES=GOD.

    comment sussrious · Community Member · Sun Apr 17, 2005 @ 02:19am
    Heh heh yeah I guess so ^^ heart

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Sun May 01, 2005 @ 08:55pm
    Moonshine boy...that's a lovely metaphor. Though it strangely reminds me of Shoeshine boy.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sun May 01, 2005 @ 09:56pm
    Shoeshine boy? 0_o?

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Tue May 03, 2005 @ 02:48am
    I think it's the 'shine' part.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Tue May 24, 2005 @ 01:56am
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