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i sEE THe rED sKy AnD i KnOW
Mood ~Calmly cynical and a tiny bit whistful~
Music ~I need a hero ((Ok...so I watched Shrek 2 >_>; ))~


<center>I watch the sun sink slowly
And I turn me head to hide
It looks at me so coldly
And relieves me of my pride
~
The warmth it brings is sorrow
Yet it can make a fire
It makes today tomorrow
Yet not our hearts tire
~
The sweetest pain
A bullet so desired
That one would die again
THe sound of that gun fired
~
I wish this pain on no one
For it can so destroy
As cold as the sun
And with your heart, toy
~
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Well that was a pitiful excuse for a poem....try again? this time free verse...

<center>The walls of the buildings around me
Come crashing to the ground
My own wall stand yet fragile
I know my fate will come
~
I
Will
Remember
~
The sun belies the coming storm
That will take me down
As I wait for my destruction
I help the fallen that have come before
~
Do
I
See
What
I
Become
?
~
They all have bowed their heads
Is it just my pride that keeps me up?
I want to scream but there is no one there
I am alone in my resistance
~
And
It
Begins
Again
~
I wait for something
But do I really know what I want?
That dream I have everynight
Will it bring me to my knees as well?
~
A
Sweet
Surrender
To
~
What is it that makes you
As I look out
~
What is it that brought you
Without a sound
~
What am I to do
If not you
~
What breaks us apart
Again and again
~
What makes us deny
Out hearts to die
~
What are we to make of this
A memory in time
~
As
We
All
Die
~
As
We
All
Wish
~
For
~
Everything
~
To
~
End
~
.
.
.
.
~
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  • User Comments: [9]
    Good, good. The first was alright, but seemed forced. However! I love these two lines:

    The sweetest pain
    A bullet so desired

    I have no idea why, though. xp

    comment Happy0 · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 03:47am
    ~
    As
    We
    All
    Die
    ~
    As
    We
    All
    Wish
    ~
    For
    ~
    Everything
    ~
    To
    ~
    End

    That is SO freakin' true.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 06:51am
    Happy~ Yeah I thought you'd appreciate it ^_^ I think most of my more "formated" poems seem forced...maybe that is why I like free-verse 3nodding

    Raziel~Yeah isn't it? whee


    comment Paranine · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 08:15pm
    However, one could argue that the ideal Eden is Armageddon's aftermath. But ja'never know.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 12:58am
    xd Yes...one never knows...but I intend to find out 3nodding

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 05:54am
    Even if the world did end, it wouldn't fulfill my goal in life.

    You'd still be floating in space. stare

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 09:34pm
    blaugh And what goal might that be? And you know..space can be fun too 3nodding

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Mon Nov 22, 2004 @ 04:53am
    Yeah...when you have it conquered. stare

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 07:30am
    Wanna help? biggrin

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Mon Nov 29, 2004 @ 04:23am
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