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~rEDEMpTiON~
<center>Wake to the suns brief ending glory
The whispers bring you back
Shadows console you in the dark
As a cry pierces the night
Ward of the Eternal
Blessed of the Dead
Return to your maker, Child
Before you're made alive
To
End
This
All
The bleak suroundings hold
Fate at every turn
Malignace roams here as well
As flesh and blood
So
Real
A
Touch
Eyes once shadowed and glazed
Smile with a warmth
Run and hide, My fair fleshed one
For your shadow shows your name
One
Hundred
Hells
To
Have
The stairs here reach only to the sky
Even the sun sheens black
Ruby wine graces our lips
As ever we knew grace
No
Power
Over
Us
You have sought sanctuary
Away from your eyes
Hold out your hand to me
And I will show you home
As
Ever
The
Light
Shows
Lies
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  • User Comments: [9]
    Oooh, nice. whee

    comment Happy0 · Community Member · Mon Nov 15, 2004 @ 06:56am
    Why thankies! whee heart Are you writing any more poems?

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Mon Nov 15, 2004 @ 11:29pm
    My poems are few and far between. sad

    comment Happy0 · Community Member · Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 01:15pm
    O dear sad ....I really wonder how I'm able to write so much....hmmm...

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 08:55pm
    Genius, perhaps?

    comment Happy0 · Community Member · Wed Nov 17, 2004 @ 02:07am
    Hardly!! You forget who you are talking about, my dear.... 3nodding

    comment Paranine · Community Member · Wed Nov 17, 2004 @ 05:30am
    ...

    Give me your muse.

    Now.

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 06:58am
    Would that I had one sweatdrop

    I like the lines

    Return to your maker, Child
    Before you're made alive

    I don't know why ^_^


    comment Paranine · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 08:25pm
    I like those meanings of those two lines too...but how can you return to your Maker, if you're Maker will turn you alive once you return to him?

    comment Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 07:42am
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