okay, here's the deal...I wanna write a story but I don't know where to begin...I had an Idea...that a good story doesn't start with the main character...it begins with either his or her guardians, here's what I have so far, it isn't the beginning, but it'll work out
Advent strode across the grass, the sun was going to set any time now. Sephiroth, who had made himself self proclaimed leader of Advent's guardians, walked slower with the others, but still keeping an eye on the young summoner as she made her way to the foot of a hill. She stood waiting for the others. Advent, and her guardians, Sephiroth, Daemon, Leilou, Montagna, Paine, Seth and Kadaj looked up trying to see the top.
"How about a race?" Seth suggested,
"We've gotta leave now..." Kadaj protested,
"It's only a race, sure let's race..." Advent replied with a smile,
"Ooh, count me in too!" Leilou yelped,
"Alright...on your marks..." Sephiroth began, "Get set..." tension built up between the racers, ready to take off at any moment, but Sephiroth never said go, instead, he took off running up the hill himself,
"Hey! No fair!" Seth cried, Advent took off next, followed by Daemon, then Advent, and Seth while Kadaj took to walking. In the end, it was Battle who won, of course, he was a wraith, so he was much faster than everyone else. When those who were racing reached the top they collapsed against the tree and each other breathlessly,
"Man...'s steeper than I thought..." Leilou gasped, when they caught their breath Kadaj had joined them and Advent was looking over the edge of the rise with Seth,
"The lake looks pink..." The ten year old commented,
"That's because of the flowers under the water....see?" Leilou explained pointing a paw at the water, "All the fish gather around them and the water appears pink, but it's mostly because of the setting sun..." As the sun set, a calm silence came upon the group and thoughts began to come upon them, what would their journey be like? What would An 'Dul be like, would any one die? What would coming home be like? Would they even come home? Advent dissmissed these thoughts and took a good look at her home before the sun set, for when it did they were to leave, it was the last look she would get for a while, so she embraced it and remembered it, like a painting in the back of her mind...
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Cloud is almost better than Kadaj...hey...I said ALMOST