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blood stained melody Blood stained melody my song is heard through time the tale of a soul slain a brutal rendition of an elegy to peace a screaming mix of the angelic chords once sang. the song written corrupted by blood stained by hate and burned by spite once white and serene now crimson and torrential my song is heard through time. the chords once flown freely and naturally now scream and scratch claw and tear their way to the ears of innocence staining and defiling the hearts of all turning hymns to dirges A tale of a soul slain. my soul crushed by the composer seeking revenge and tainting all that hear seeking life and emotion leaving desolation and death a bloody veil drapped over purity My song is heard through time A tale of a soul slain. ~andreas.

Posted by: everlasting elegy Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 04:19am

Throw caution to the wind and let your fantasies run wild. Don't let your spirit be kept in a cage, let it go free and show the world it's beauty.

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Ki the Guardian
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Commented on: Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 08:32pm


	I don't know why, but I thought of Role playing (sick symphony?!) when I read this. Nice personification of music. It's a very "minor" piece however.

Commented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 06:54am


	Lurve the use of Music. biggrin A very transition style poem. Juxtaposition is Magnifique.

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Commented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 03:55pm


	I liked the personification (kind of) of music. I believe this actually expressing the nature of one's life rather well. Always changing. Always moving forward (or backward if you're me) It's funny because I was listening the the instrumental version of Simple and Clean while reading. It definitely added to the atmosphere. 4laugh OMG Domo's back on the emotecons! Yay! Brava Niisan!! Nicely done! applauds La Vie Boheme starts Though I must Admit that your performance as Collins was MUCH better. whee The need to express, to communicate! (Our feckin anthem!)

Commented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 08:09pm


	dark poetry is not really my favorite. challange yourself to write something more positive, maybe? not completely positive. just less... horrible? xD like. no blood.

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