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Love's Lobotomy Love’s Lobotomy I’m in the chair, my limbs bound Anesthetic in, I’m winding down. I feel the pick upon my head Can’t help but feel I’ll soon be dead. They say this can cure me And emotionless eternity I smile before he’s about to start I can only think the pick should be at my heart For its not my brain that makes me love But he insists it’s from above. I open my eyes just one last time, Before I atone for my heartfelt crime. I feel the pick about to go through And when the light clears, the one holding the hammer, Is you. -Sincerely yours Andreas

Posted by: everlasting elegy Fri Sep 19, 2008 @ 10:45pm

Throw caution to the wind and let your fantasies run wild. Don't let your spirit be kept in a cage, let it go free and show the world it's beauty.

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[.Ichigo-Chan.]
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Commented on: Fri Sep 19, 2008 @ 10:55pm


	I really like it. It's good. The second line is my favorite, I think. The anestetic one.

Commented on: Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 12:48am


	I love the brain and heart part. Lot O' the Rhyming too, Ah Yeah. biggrin

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Commented on: Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 02:22am


	I love it. Andrew Neale has talenttttttt.

Commented on: Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 03:14am


	Yes much talent. Interesting concept.

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Commented on: Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 04:40am


	It's extremely well written. But I can honesty say that the concept is scaring the st out of me, because I know what you're eluding to. We've discussed it in A.P. psych before. It's sickens me. It enrages me actually, to think people can "fix" your thoughts through process of surgery. My philosophy is never physically ****** with the mind. It is too delicate to be man-handled. Yes, I know I want to be a therapist and I'm on meds for chemical imbalances in my own brain. But that is by means of conditioning and regulating chemicals and hormones released. There is a reason the brain has such thick protection around it. It was never meant to be touched. Sorry, about the rant. I didn't think I'd get that much into it. Love you. Nicely wrotten my friend.

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