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always remember someone, somewhere. They're always there.
sealed fate.
Sealed Fate

The thin line between fantasy and reality
becomes painfully obvious when you speak to me.
Once support and love i would foolishly out-pour
But now ,for you, i say no more.
I spent too long on this for me,
it took too long for me to see
that i was just being naive.
All the while composing my own elegy.

I clinched my fate the day we met
I thought then and there the stone was set.
But much to my own surprise
I had just written my own demise.
Only now ,as of late
do i realize i sealed my fate
The day has come for me to live
my own life and end this harrowing pensive.

Forever sealed i shall remain
White snow by blood stained
An indignant twist of fate
leaves me standing at hell's gate.
Waiting for serene repose
I clinch my eyes hoping for the gate's close
But it is open inviting me to slumber in pain
I ,by my own fate, have been slain.

-Andreas






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Ashy-Fly
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 18, 2008 @ 01:00am
. . . intense! eek


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 18, 2008 @ 02:15am
Sad love. But beautiful, you seriously should consider a profession that involves writing.



Madlibzz
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[.Ichigo-Chan.]
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 18, 2008 @ 02:19am
very interesting.
I really like the first two lines in the second stanza, for some reason.
Good job.


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 18, 2008 @ 03:04am
Better than the crap I right.
You spelled "leave" wrong though. (sorry, I don't mean to be a spelling nazi.)



Ki the Guardian
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