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My world experienced though my intertwined mind and my bright green eyes.
Some of my writing and whatever I feel like putting in it I guess. Prepare for randomness :) And for whatever is going on in my life!
No place to crash when you're falling fast. right?
Well this is the writing I did a few days ago! I thought I'd type it today. smile Maybe getting a journal was a good thing for me. Still prepare for the randomness though. You'll never know what to expect! Today was the first day back to school. sad I was planning on never going back but apparently spring break doesn't last forever. Who knew? I can't wait for summer! whee Just can't wait to get out of school! I've found today that the school days seem to go faster when you don't think about it. Maybe I'll try it again. blaugh




No place to crash even though your falling fast 3/5/08

Existence pulls you away in all directions,
You’re falling fast,
As every cell in your body surges forward,
No space between you and a fateful crash,
Your mind goes blank,
As the feeling takes over,
You’re spinning out of control,
The rush of blood
Takes you down,
As you hit the ground
Your eyes take in the sky,
And the door you’ve just fallen from,
No arms to catch you,
No words to help you get through all the things your mind has forseen,
You run off gaining speed
Letting the feeling take over
Letting it take you to places you’ve never been,
Spinning out of control
Your mask begins to crack,
As the shattered glass falls around you resting at your feet,
Your mask portrayed a face of no misery and pain,
Vacant and alone,
Because your mask was all that you’ve every known,
No tear to shed because there’s no feeling it what has begun,
You’re resting at the point of where there is no time,
Upon a bed of stones
You lie with no hope of ever returning home,
There’s no place to crash when you’re falling fast.

Thanks for reading if you did, please send me comments if you wish!


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  • User Comments: [3]
    I love it. 3nodding . heart .

    comment savetherainforest · Community Member · Wed Apr 09, 2008 @ 10:37pm
    You made some spelling errors, I think..,i thought i should point out. Spell check wouldn't have caught them because technically they are real words spelled correctly but i think you meant something else.

    like "was all you've every known" - didn't you mean "ever known" ?
    and "your mind has for scene," I think you meant "foreseen"

    hope that helps. You can delete this after you read it. I just wanted to tell you not the world.
    Great Poem though.

    comment mule 624 · Community Member · Sun May 18, 2008 @ 11:32pm
    lol i had the music from your profile in my head when i read this and this would make perfectly good lyrics for a song if you changed the stopping points and rearranged comma's and where new lines start. mrgreen I can imagine it as just the kind of music you listen to.

    (this was my 1st comment but i rearanged them so this one would be visable.) =P

    comment mule 624 · Community Member · Sun May 18, 2008 @ 11:40pm
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