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I climb out of my window and drop to the ground with a low 'thud,'
I leave the window cracked so I can get back in,
I begin to walk down the street towards "the house."

When I arrive I find that all the lights are off like they always are around this time,
I walk around the back and crouch down,
And walk over to the open basement window,
And climb down inside.

As I make it inside I quietly close the window,
Before I turn around you wrap your arms around my waist,
And begin to kiss my neck.

I turn around and kiss your lips fully,
And you lead me over to your made up bed,
And we take eachothers clothes off,
And you cram us under the covers.

We make our beautiful music,
Late into the night,
To where no one can interupt us.

After we have finshed our last note,
You lay next to me breathing hard,
I turn to you and you wrap your arms around me,
We lay there together panting,groaning,
I turn around and stare at the wall waiting for your breathing to even,
Once it has I kiss you one final time and get out of your grasp,
I take my 5minute walk home and sneak back in my room,
I shed my clothes once more and grab my pj's and climb in bed,
Once under the covers I remember tonights events,
And hug myself,
And I stare at my own wall and know that,
Tonight is not the first but the 5th time,
And after tonight and many other nights this will be my duty.



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HalfKorean
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 28, 2007 @ 02:12am
It sounds really depressing at the end. It sounds as if the guy is using the girl's body. Nowhere in there does it say that they had sex with love or compassion or anything. It was really good. If I could write as good as you, I'd write everyday for the rest of my life. lol I'd probably do a lot more in my Creative Writing class too.


Because I knew you, I have been changed for good.

Love ya untruepromises heart
commentCommented on: Sun Oct 28, 2007 @ 04:02am
lol sis I no I didn't want it 2 sound gross, but we did do it. the girl is me. and I didn't really have sex I thought of it 4 somewhere. does it suck?



Corbins_my_boy07
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smexy-jannet
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 07, 2007 @ 02:10am
omg !!!!was that like a poem or like that really happen to you and you really did that becuase it was just like a movies or someone telling you a stories it was so cool i really liked it but i really hope you didn't do that becuase if i did that my mom would want was to move from state or get in big trouble!!!by:smexy-jannet heart heart biggrin


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 17, 2007 @ 11:43pm
I thought that was lovly. It feels like I was going to cry. crying
Well,will u be my gf? S



Chris_52GX
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Dellanora
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 22, 2007 @ 07:17pm
you're a writer? me too! i just dont put mine on gaia. it was really good! at the end its seems like she had sex w/ him because she felt she needed to, not because she loved him. nice job!


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 01:54am
you may not kno me but i like ur story it was good! xd



eyoreluver33
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eyoreluver33
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 01:55am
plz be my friend! 4laugh


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 28, 2008 @ 03:28am
hey i sell january birthstone crowns at a low price and if u want u can go to the market store and buy one they r really cute. plz b my friend i liked ur story it was really good mrgreen



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