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poem #1
my first song....((not finished))

u lie....
u lie next to me
so quiet
lifelessly..
im lost and on my own
i cant make it all alone
please god
please tell me why
why the good
have to die?
will we all just fade away?
to the nothing where we'll stay

Chrous

u can try
to brake me down
i'll fall
i'll cry
but i will rise again

((all i got so far))






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ninetailedfoxdemon454
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 31, 2007 @ 01:35pm
that is the beginning to a great song. keep working on it!!!


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 02:44am
thats deep... AND TOTALLY AWSOME!!! ALL HAIL FOX DEMON!!! WOOOO!!!



L33t Hax0rs ftw
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