Styphon
Kelwyn
Styphon
PegasusHime
Styphon
PegasusHime
mitsubachi maelstrom
How does my Grammar rate?
And is their an allowance for deliberate badness?
Eh, your sentence structure is awkward, too. And for some reason I don't think "badness" is the appropriate word to use there, although I must admit I cannot think of what the appropriate word would be.
Your grammar isn't that bad, and it's definitely readable, it just isn't fantastic or anything.
Could you tell me what you think of my grammar?
I do hope you'll make some allowance for the deliberate lack of quality resulting from my poor attempts at a cute, conversational tone.