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EverAfter
Below the timeless stars of night
The moon begins to feel just right
Although we can not see
I feel you and you feel me
Sacred alignment of blessed desire
Heart filled with with passionate fire
Forget about my hateful past
ANd finally, for once, at last-
....Damn Regret I'll try and forget
Back from that hateful lust...
No, NO! I must!
Oh curs`ed sin leave my side!
Let me off this forsaken ride!
Covered in blood
From grievance flood
What can cure my memory
Oh why, Oh why can't I flee?!?!
My passion flame this does extinguish
For I know my sins I can not relinquish
ANd so as the sun begins to rise
So does all the lies...
Damn regret...
Why can't I forget?


Ieri Aedile
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Love, Love, Love this one. Perfect rhyming and rythm. And it is very deep in a non cliche way. It strays off topic a bit, going from love to regret, but that is a perfect portrayal of human emotions. (It is fun to analyze things like that! whee ) This one is easy to read and doesn't have any big bumps. Good job. Keep them coming!

    comment Cute n Koi · Community Member · Tue Feb 20, 2007 @ 01:04am
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