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EverAfter
Oh bright flower, radiant and pure
Why Oh Why! My love do you allure
I would rip out my heart for thee
If thou doth desire it to be!
The key to my heart is to belong to another
Yet why do I find you to be my one true lover?
This time, though, my heart feels genuine
And yet such a bind do I find myself in
No, No! I know I should not!
But, my heart you do melt and my mind you do rot…
Oh, Graceful Goddess if only there was a way-
Just one single word slip past your golden lips that you say!
In turn I will with all my heart obey…
Why won’t my wings take flight?
And be guided by your blessed light
Tell me my love, is this all for not!
My passion that burns so fiery and hot…
Will you not be the wine that fills my grail
And be there for me whenever I feel ale
I will give you all I have to my name!
Until I am both poor and lame
Please tell me that would please you!
Alas I would sell my soul if thee would like for me to-
Just promise me one thing in return-
All of your tender care and love to earn…
Please Oh Please satisfy my one request!!!
And if not-
At
Least
My heart can be put to rest.


Ieri Aedile
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Good idea for a poem, but it lacks......something. I can't place my tongue on it, but I believe it might be delivery and the right type of words. (Flowery, but not too far fetched.) It was a stretch to rhyme genuine and in......but it may be because of how I say and read it. The first eight or so lines, along with some later in the poem are slightly confusing at first galnce. I loved the ending though, that drove through beautifully!

    comment Cute n Koi · Community Member · Thu Feb 15, 2007 @ 05:49am
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