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~.:Poems of Darkness and random ramblings of crazy person:.~
No stealing my poems or ideas for stories and stuff. You know.
A Full Metal Alchemist poem
Al's veiw of the human transmutation and what they are doing:
We just wanted to see her smiling face again
She was kind, gentle, the perfect mother
Because our father left she died
We thought we could bring her back
We where wrong

Now my brother and I are seeking to return to normal
Because we tried to bring her back
I don't have a human body...
Brother has metal arm, and a metal leg.
We stepped into god's territory
And we paid the price

He became a part of the miltary
In hopes to restore our bodies faster
We've made little progress
But we chose this path

I knew we shouldn't have tried
I had a feeling yet
I did not act on it, now we're like this and...
Now, we created the most horrible thing, ever possible.
Mother...we're sorry.


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  • User Comments: [3]
    wow that was awesome
    The one line that stays with me is we stepped into god's territory

    comment Scorp Ession · Community Member · Wed Feb 23, 2005 @ 03:36am
    Thanks. I think I'm geting better at understanding each person's persectives on things from the show. I'm thinking I should do one of the mAsscre in Ishbal from Roy's veiw, or a state alchemists veiw(including mine if I was there too)

    comment elegantdemonofpoop · Community Member · Wed Feb 23, 2005 @ 10:44pm
    wow he is right
    We stepped into god's territory
    And we paid the price
    will stay with me forever
    and the poem itsel was well written

    comment Jinnei Meisenshi Sanada · Community Member · Mon May 23, 2005 @ 09:21am
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