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~.:Poems of Darkness and random ramblings of crazy person:.~
No stealing my poems or ideas for stories and stuff. You know.
Deceiver Of Fools ~Songfic~
Again with a songfic. What's up with me lately? Who knows but it is still first person POV so I'll be getting used to it. Once again this is sort of open to the mind I suppose. We'll see as it goes along. Song: Within Temptation "Deceiver of Fools"

You know, this almost seems like a sequel to the first one. Like, the land the woman had fought for is lost. Now the story of another girl. A poor mislead youth, blinded by love, to ever see what cruel reality is ahead. Love, is the ultimate illusion.

I don't think it's a good as the first one. More or less a look into the person's mind. I love tormented minds.

~

He feeds on fear
He feeds on pain
He rules again
With growing hate
He will gain
Their faith again


This world is stupid. We were free of this tyrant, we thought so. Now look, he's back again. Our land is suffering, and some of us, are frozen. He is known for being cruel, twisted. No matter what though, we fear him. However, the idiot men of my village, believe in him. I don't understand why. They trust him, or perhaps they just fear him as well. The women, myself included, want to die then be around that horrid man for even five minutes.

He told the tale so many times
About the dream not meant to be
In a world of the free
He plays with your mind


Of course I know personally, better then anyone else of his cruelty. However I will deny one fact, he is handsome and at the time, a charmer. When I meet him, upon my father's wish. I was stunned. I expected some evil, ugly, wrinkled old man. He was still young, he had somewhat long hair that finally kept, and he was well groomed and not overly built or too scrawny. No, to me he was perfect, and he told me, I was perfect.

We spent so much time together. More then I remember. There were... dreams he told me about. That he had, of us. It was beautiful. He told me he dreamt of our wedding. Deep within the castle, only the finest decorations, everything both of us wanted. He told me though, of what I looked like. He spoke of how lovely and angelic I looked in the white gown. How nice to was, to see my face through my mess of dark bangs. How my face, seemed so much more peaceful, and my eyes glowed with joy. He told me, he wanted to be the reason of that glowing.

As faith for the future faded fast
He grows strong with their displeasure
It sets him free


However, that perfect wedding, I realized was not going to happen. He was lying. He was cheating. All the while he kept that same smile. Even when I found out and broke down crying, I know he saw me. He still smiled. Whatever was wrong with me? This man, was cruel and uncaring.

Deceiver of hearts
Deceiver of fools
He rules with fear
Deceiver of hearts
Deceiver of fools
He rules again


Even after finding out, he tricked me into giving him the one thing that I was truly cherished for. I was with him only one night and he took from me, which only my husband should. I thought that it meant he loved me. Deceiver. Liar. Yet he still held me in the palm of his hand.

He feeds on fear
Poisons the truth
To gain their faith
To lead the way
To a world of decay


I wanted to scream at him after, to kill him for taking advantage of me like that. I told my father. When my father asked, he only replied. "I would never do such a thing." and my father believed him. Even the other women of my village didn't believe me! I know he's done this to more then just me. Just not from anyone around here. Oh heavens, why? To you hate us that much? That you created this man to destroy our world?

He rules your heart
He'll sell your soul to the grave
Without a hesitation to make
He belongs to the dark


No matter what. I'm stuck. I tried to get him to tell, but he only gave a grin more evil then the devils and said, "Do you wish to die? I can make sure no one ever finds out." and before I knew it, he knocked me to the ground, a knife over my heart. His head tilted to the side, as if to ponder it. "KILL ME!" I shouted, my own eyes burned with tears. There was no way I could go on living.

Deceiver of hearts
Deceiver of fools
He rules with fear
Deceiver of hopes
Deceiver of fools
He rules again


"You cannot die that easily. There's still use for you." he leaned over, whispering in my ear. I only gasped and tried to pull away from him. He picked my up by the collar of my shirt, throwing me against the wall. I felt a sharp pain shooting through my back from the force before falling to the ground. Where was everyone in the castle? I screamed, he laughed. No one heard. I was losing.

Please awake
And see the truth
He can only be
If you believe what he tells you
Remember who you are
What you stand for
And there will always be a way


Father? Why don't you trust me. I've pleaded with you, told you about what happened but you believe a liar over me. Ever since mother died you've been like this. Did you forget who I am? You treat me like someone you don't even want. I don't know what to do. I just want to be left alone sometimes. There has to be a way, to prove what he did.

Deceiver of hearts
Deceiver of fools
He rules with fear
Deceiver of hopes
Deceiver of fools
He rules again


A letter. From a woman who lives in the castle. His WIFE. She told me, not to worry. He didn't mean what happened and is very sorry. "Bullshit." is all I could say when reading it. It was stupid for them to believe him. He probably forced this 'wife' of his. Or just faked it. How pathetic.

In my heart there is a place
In my heart there is a trace
Of a small fire burning
A sheltering ray shines through this night
Although it's small, it's bright
But darkness is lurking


Finally, a few days of peace. My mind is more relaxed. I realize now, it doesn't matter. He can destroy the world but he won't break me. Because I will live a life that my mother would be proud of. I walked outside, only to see him. All the pride always seems to fade away when he's around. I am strong but when he looms about...it's like there's a dark storm, abyss trying to swallow me. I fear him, I hate him, and I think I might still love him...

He will sell your soul to bitterness and cold
Oh fear him


Father is dead, murdered, and I'm finally alone. I can't afford our house, so I'm stuck outside, trying to find shelter. Where is he now? The prince of the world. Probably with another girl, misleading her, destroying her life. Oh, heavens, please save us.

Deceiver of hearts
Deceiver of fools
He rules with fear
Deceiver of hopes
Deceiver of fools
Shall he rule again?


He rules this land. He rules our culture. He ruled my life. He destroyed my life. Our land is dying, our people suffering. Yet now he seems to be slipping off. Is he leaving us? Will he find a new place to destroy? I don't know. All I know is a storm brews above, and the sky cries for the once beautiful land we had.

~

The End
~Shadow of Fire

Let me fade forever into darkness. . .


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  • User Comments: [1]
    It sounds like at the end, she started to become like the others, it just sounds that way, I could be perfectly wrong as to what actually happened.
    It was beautifully written. I hope you do more, or at least some like it. Writing poetry, lyrics, or stories and is a talent not all have, and you my friend, have a gift ^_^.
    Cherish it.

    comment Exodus Knight · Community Member · Sat Jul 29, 2006 @ 06:25am
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