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the saiyan chronicles *please comment*
My thoughts and desires
layer by layer
as my eyes wandered by a saw an interesting sight.
The sky shimmered and the clouds glimmered.
Not a sound came from my mouth though i tried my best as the sky fell.
Piece by piece, layer by layer it fell.
Then after darkness had overcome me i awoke.
The sky was now replaced by a dark vortex which encased an eerie white.
The object twirled and trees swirled around me.
Then in the strange mix of white and black an eye appeared.
It looked at me and lifted me up.
Before i knew it i was flying.
Flying over the shattered sky.
Flying over the dark earth.
Over every obstacle in my path.






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JIMMYxJAM
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 16, 2006 @ 09:48am
wow this is very intresting. i think you should draw a picture to go along with it. it would be even more awesome! lol 4laugh


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 17, 2006 @ 11:09pm
thank you whee and maybe but i don't think i draw that well xp



saiyan2k1
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Star1821
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 04:27am
interesting...


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 08, 2007 @ 02:44am
Not bad!! <33
You write that?



Gwada-Babe
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saiyan2k1
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 10, 2007 @ 02:30am
of course lol *nods* write all my poems


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