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Poetry of a Twisted Heart
Within lay the dreams and the desires The wants and the needs a demonic dreamer Day dreamer turned poet As words pour from the cavity of a Twisted Heart Like blood from the wound
I wonder...
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Sometimes it hurts to be in love with you
Sometimes it's just too hard
And do you notice?
No
And does it matter?
No
I'll love you no matter how much it hurts
I'll love you no matter how hard it is


Post Permanent Link T0shiya · Wed Feb 02, 2005 @ 06:01am · 3 Comments
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    User Comments: [3]
    Nice, but short. Experiment with different rhymeschemes and how you place your words. Like E.E.Cummings poetry.

     
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    comment Azrael the Mad · Community Member · Sat Feb 12, 2005 @ 07:30pm
    Toshi!!! I am back! I love the poem. Not bad rhyme wise. And for old times sake, *Snuggle*

     
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    comment Lobbi · Community Member · Mon Feb 21, 2005 @ 05:25am
    *snuggles Lobbi and smiles happily* I've missed you... gah it's been so so long... *pouts then giggles* heart

     
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    comment T0shiya · Community Member · Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 05:25am
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