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Poetry of a Twisted Heart
Within lay the dreams and the desires The wants and the needs a demonic dreamer Day dreamer turned poet As words pour from the cavity of a Twisted Heart Like blood from the wound
Fading to
<center>Conciousness fading to black
Fading to the back
Back recesses of my mind
Of my soul
Turning black
Turning back to a time before
A time before love held sway
Before I cared
Cared for anything at all
Not even you
Back before I wanted you
I couldn't have you
Before it mattered so much
Before you mattered
Before I loved hopelessly
Loved what I could never have
But I want so bad
I want this love
This love I have for you
For you I dream
Dream of turning
Turning back to you
To my soul
My minds unconciousnsess
Fading to black
To the bleakness of reality
Reality where I dwell
I dwell on dreams
Dreams that fade
Fade to the back
Back recesses of my mind
Of my soul
Fading to black


T0shiya
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  • User Comments: [2]
    I like "fading to"!Very cool!Without looking too deep,you've made it strong about a strong feeling with no la-di-da type writing,all clouds and butterfly stuff,you know!I find that very hard to do!

    comment Billie Joe Bob · Community Member · Tue Dec 28, 2004 @ 07:35pm
    Thank you... I'm glad that you enjoy my poetry.

    comment T0shiya · Community Member · Sat Jan 01, 2005 @ 07:22pm
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