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Lost Within My Mind
An account of my life.
Chapter 4, page 2
((Alright, sorry. I did not post it later. Sorry. Here it is smile )

That night I waited in my cell sighlently and without complaint. I did not touch the bars, as my guard so crudely addvised. As the moon rose I went through every step in my mind over and over again. What if it didn't work? What if I didn't make it? What if I was shot down? I shivered at the diffrent scenes of my sprawled across the ground, blood erupting from various parts of my body. Best not to think of that.

I waited for the moon to cast it's ghostly glow through the skylight above my head. It was well past midnight. The gaurd, though I could nto see him, was alseep. His snores sounded loudly in the darkness. I strolled over to the bars that kept me hostage. I took one in my hand and tried to bend it. To my surprise, it slightly did bend. I smirked. What kind of cell was this? Quickly checking that my captor was not awake, I took the two bars, one in each had, and tried to pry them open. A faint creaking sound echoed in the room. My heart was pounding so hard in my chest I thought it would burst out of my chest. The guard did not stir. Again I tried to pull apart the bars, each time making the hole alittle bigger. THe sky outside began to lighten abit. I must make my escape now. Not caring how big the hole was now, I squeezed myself through. The guard grunted. I held my breath and creeped torwards the door. As I touched the handle the guard grunted again. I turned it slowly, oh ever so slowly. As I heard the faint click of the door opening, I pushed on it. Light suddenly poored into the room. The guard jurked awake. "Hey!" he called. I did not stay to listen to the rest of him.

I charged out of the room. An alarm sounded. My heart was beating in my ears as I made a break for a fence I saw. I ran. AS I erached teh fence I heard people running torwards me. Not worrying about the barb wire, I leaped over the barrier. I felt the metal barbs stick into my skin. It hurt, and I felt the blood running down my legs. But when in the face of death, survival was all I could think of. I charge on, one of my legs getting stuck. I screamed at myself and jerked it of of the fence. I felt my skin rip. With tears streaming down my face I tried to go on. The pain was to much. I collasped. "She's down!" Someone called. I cried, the pain of my leg and the sorrow of not escaping pieced holes my already bleeding heart. What was I to do now?

Suddenly, I heard a car's wheels screach infront of me. I went to look up, but the pain kept my head bent. "Sabriel!" called a voice. Who was it? I was losing conciousness. I was being lifted into a car, someone was driving fast. I was safe.






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EmOii SaLi
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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 30, 2006 @ 06:32pm
First journal comment! That looks scary is it real or just a final draft?


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 01, 2006 @ 05:56pm
lol! This is just a random story I write because I'm bored. I might publish it, but this is not the final draft.



Element_Immortal
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