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Murfin's Babbles and Nonesense.
Poems?
Okay, well last night I started writing as I usually do and I came up with a few poems or whatever they're called. I like them, and I'd like to get reviews on them. <3

My Ignorance

I never knew I loved you, until you wanted someone else.
I never knew I needed you until you left
I never knew you were my sunshine, until you were gone and it rained
I never thought I’d miss you, and now its all I can do

I was a fool. I was a jerk. I was WRONG!!
Please, come back to where you belong.
They say its better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all
I say I’m selfish, and want you to stay
You’re mine! Not hers! Don’t you see?
Or did my ignorance wash away your feelings for me?

My Prince Charming

Your smile is contagious
Your antics endearing
You’re adorable, that’s a plus
With you, its all good feelings
When you cry, it hurts me
I want to take your pain away
That way happy you shall be
And I’ll hear your giggles throughout the day
Yes, you’re mischievous
There’s no denying that
But that’s not alarming
You’re sweet and pure
You’re my Prince Charming

Dedicated to Elli <3

I Love You

I need…your touch
I want…your love
I have…your attention
I forget…to hate you
I regret…not telling you

I LOVE YOU!!


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  • User Comments: [1]
    WOW!!! these are great!!!! i like them!!! ur a great writer!!!! ^_^ heart biggrin heart biggrin 3nodding

    comment OrenjiRan · Community Member · Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 03:47am
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