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My Writings
The Fallen
They have fallen
but is it bad
and is it sad

should they be worried
or even scared
they werent prepared

but thats how it works
its just sneaks on you
what should they do

what has happened
do you know
does it show

is it bad or is it good
can you tell
have you fell

something has struck them
what is its name
will they be the same

should we all cry now
are they safe and sound
you want to know what went down

well they were hit
and they have changed
and it isnt strange

they are happy and good
they are in love
and feel above

that is what hit them
so its okay
theyll live another day

who were they you ask
well one was me
the other an angel is she

by Dan ^_^


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  • User Comments: [1]
    I love the rhyme scheme and the flow of the poem. Excellent. Keep up the good work. biggrin

    Epic heroes...
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    ...last forever.
    comment Xero Kings · Community Member · Tue Jul 21, 2009 @ 03:48pm
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