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Well... I'm back.. With a little bit more of the story..
..In poem form. For those of you who don't know what poem form I am using,
I am using TANKA. It is another form of Japanese poetry.
The first line of the tanka MUST be 5 syllables only. The next line is 7, and the next 5. Then the other two lines at the end are both 7 syllables.
This story/poem was from like.. grade 6 or something. ._. I gave some of the people Japanese names.
Okay! Now continuing.

GUIDE:
" = Kira Speaking
* = Girl/me/Alice (XD) speaking
( and ) = Peter Speaking
< and > = Noah Speaking
~ = Sakura Speaking


*I still don't trust you.*
"Fine then, you can always die."
I sighed *Fine, I'll come.*
The man smiled at those words.
(There is another person?)

Another voice said
I turned around to the voice
"My apologies,"
"This is my brother, Peter"
He merely nodded (Hello...)

Before I knew it,
I was in front of a house
*This..house is...* I said
<The old haunted one?>
*Y-Yeah..* I said quietly

TO BE CONTINUED

I'm getting lazy from typing down my old stories.... ._.
Break!
I demand a break!
I'll probably type down some more today...