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I'm starting to like cleaning up my room more and more..
I'm finding so much of my past work.
I'm not sure what year this work was done though.. I think like.. Grade 6 or 8..?
All I know is that I always used to work on this story in poem form.

GUIDE:
" = Man speaking
* = Girl speaking

Lost

It was midnight,
I was trembling in the cold.
Wearing thin garments
My warm breath was forming clouds
In the cold and lonely night

A strange man appeared
He smiled slightly at me
Then gave me his coat
"Shouldn't you be home right now?"
His voice was gentle and kind

I gave no response
He sighed then shouted a name
"Yes?" A voice called
"Take this girl back to her home."
*I'm not going back to there!*

The men turned, surprised
*I'll never go back to there.*
"And why wouldn't you?"
I paused *I'm just not going.*
"I'll let you keep your secrets."

I looked up at him
*Thank you..* I said quietly
The man just nodded
Then began to walk away
"Well? Are you coming with me?"

I gave him a look
*I'm coming where exactly?*
"Well I can't just leave!"
"You'd be alone in the cold!"
*But I just met you today..!*

"So what?" The man said
*We barely know each other!*
The man rolled his eyes "Come on."
*To where?* I began to shout
"To your brand new home, of course."

TO BE CONTINUED

=/ I'll just post the rest tomorrow... *yawns*


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