"Is that so?" Dad asked Kinzoku, as he got into a fighting stance. He then whispered to us, "Raisu, Sekiri, get away from here. Try to get home."
"Do you really think that you're going to be able to stop me?" Kinzoku laughed.
"I don't know, I'll just have to find out..."
By that time, Raisu and I had started running home. We turned around to see what was happening and watched as our dad was sent flying to the ground. "Daddy!" Raisu yelled starting to run back to him.
"Are you crazy?" I yelled as began pulling him away from Dad. "That guy will kill us! And Dad told us to go home!"
"Where do you think you're going?" Kinzoku asked appearing in front of us. "You better not be trying to get away Dragon. I couldn't imagine what would befall your brother if you did."
Raisu then began to run, and I attempted to follow him, but it didn't work. Kinzoku grabbed my shirt and drug me away.
He then took me to what appeared to be a spaceship. Once inside, he strapped me to a table and instructed a robot to take blood out of my arm with a gigantic seringe(needle...for those who don't know hospital terms)! The blood that was taken from my arm was then transferred into another machine. I was then fipped on to my left side, and that machine began to tattoo my arm with my own blood.
Once that was done, I was flipped back onto my back. Kinzoku then appeared with a heating devise of some kind with three metal rods in it. At the bottom of each of these three rods, was the Chinese symbol for dragon. He then took my left hand and began to brand my hand with those rods. I eventually passed out from the pain after screaming.
When I woke up, my dad was carring me, and I had the strangest feeling that Kinzoku had told me that he'd be back for me within a week.
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Red Dragon
This journal is an experiment of something that I want to write. It started out as a fanfic and I'm trying to see if I can make the idea into a book....
And I am allowing comments...but don't put anything like 'this sucks"
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Even some of the greatest warriors

have their off days.

have their off days.