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yeah
my other poems XD
sorrow... such deep sorrow, making me wonder about tomorrow...
the pain pierces my bloodstained heart...
oh please tell me, why must we part?
my soul is dying, and i am starting to weep...
through my eyes, the liquid starts to seep...
your face is in my eyes, your words in my memories,
come rescue me now, take me with you please?
for i can't live without you, for your life i would die...
you may be thinking this, but this is not a lie...
i love you so much, come with me,
for i will show you, how our future will be...




slowly dying,
choking for air, no one to care...
my life has yet to spare...
drowning in sorrow, too much sadness consumed....
through the darkness, my death has been assumed....
covered in swarthy, a demise of hope,
taking all the pain, having no one to cope...
sharing my love, but not gaining it in return,
my life is hopeless, my soul is left to burn....
as i lay there dying, i am lent a hand,
reaching up slowly, following every command...
i find myself loved, cared for, and adored,
to the ship of life, i have just climbed aboard....



tell me what you think plz.... and yes, this is what is in my mind every day.... i know, it is scary cry


SaD_eMo_ChIcK
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  • User Comments: [8]
    ........ comments plz?

    comment SaD_eMo_ChIcK · Community Member · Sat Dec 03, 2005 @ 02:21am
    why think like that sexy.

    comment Sanoci · Community Member · Thu Dec 15, 2005 @ 01:00am
    my life is horrible...

    comment SaD_eMo_ChIcK · Community Member · Fri Dec 16, 2005 @ 01:04am
    'tis good ^_^

    comment bishoujou · Community Member · Fri Dec 16, 2005 @ 12:13pm
    Shall i come and rescue You? wink

    comment I30X · Community Member · Wed Dec 21, 2005 @ 04:07am
    yeah domokun surprised

    comment SaD_eMo_ChIcK · Community Member · Thu Dec 22, 2005 @ 02:10am
    *waits*

    comment SaD_eMo_ChIcK · Community Member · Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 06:16am
    if i would have seen it maybe i could've came to save u...

    comment Wishing-To-Die · Community Member · Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 01:44am
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