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yeah
poem
how do you like my poem xd ?
give some suggestions plz.

choking, dying, grasping for air...
no one to share, no one to care...
trapped in a box, secluded from life...
covered in locks, buried alive...
alone in the dark, to scared to come out...
to short of breath, to make a loud shout...
hiding in the dark, all alone...
then through the darkness, a bright light shone...
looking to the light, dreading to see...
appearing as a shadow, hiding from thee...
approaching slowly, how could this be?
what next, will life become of me?
coming to the light, looking bare...
having yet to overcome death's scare.


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    hey, that's my poem!

    comment SaD_eMo_ChIcK · Community Member · Fri Oct 07, 2005 @ 03:08am
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