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Things in my mind
The things I think up when I'm bord.
Fear: Part 3

You stand there, your legs unwilling to move as you gaze back at the eyes that have found you. Finaly gaining the strenght to move, you run to the side, into the dark room. Franticly you run knowing the eyes are right behind. Soon you run into a wall, slaming into a light switch. without thinking you flip the wet switch and the room explodes with light. you turn to they eyes to find that it was only some yellow covering on the windows. Sighing once more, you sit down, then notice the wet floor. you look down to see the floor covered in blood and scramble to your feet. suddenly the lights fliker off and the sound of screaching metal feels the room. yout turn and flip the switch up and down, tring to get the lights back on but to no avail they remain dark. turning back to the room, you press your back to the wall and the sound draws closer, the same sound you and your now dead friend had heared in the hall some time ago, but this time your friend is not there. Your left with nothing but fear as you stand in the dark with heavy breaths....... alone.


Kairi Saka
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  • User Comments: [4]
    *reads the title "Things In My Mind..."
    ...
    ...
    You have a very scary mind Kairi xd but its very nice short story ^_^

    comment Wolfie_chan · Community Member · Tue Dec 02, 2008 @ 07:00pm
    First off,
    where am i? XD

    Second off,
    why the hell would i go somewhere unpopulated!!! XD
    (( jk to both of those ))

    thats a scary feeling. being alone, especilly when you have a phsycopathic killa on the losse. 3nodding

    comment Amnia · Community Member · Tue Dec 02, 2008 @ 07:03pm
    i love it i was rly sucked in and i felt some of that fear. your rly talented razz and i want more lol!

    comment Cooter Box · Community Member · Tue Dec 02, 2008 @ 07:05pm
    *wants more*
    i thought i was gonna have an orgy in my pants
    >.>
    <.<
    i love the vivid, and gruesome detail u put into this short story ^-^

    comment Bobby Pena · Community Member · Mon Dec 08, 2008 @ 03:47am
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