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Things in my mind
The things I think up when I'm bord.
the Unnoticed
Part 3


The same, always the same, no one noticed, emotionless face watching the emotionless girl. Going unnoticed, people looking through her, never noticing. She looks at them, trying to speek through motionless lips, going unheard. Moving across the class to the girl, walking unnoticed, no saw, no one saw her. standing by her, emotionless and sad, she looks up an saw, saw the unnoticed like her...
both going unnoticed, both going unseen, someone knew me.......
......... someone knew



...end...


:: this story was influanced by a "Lain" amv on youtube ::
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OEkm2RiS1OA&feature=related


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  • User Comments: [1]
    This is truly one of the saddest short stories I've read

    if you write anymore be sure to tell I'd love to read them

    comment Wolfie_chan · Community Member · Tue Sep 30, 2008 @ 07:49am
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