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Of the Shadows
This journal shall merely be random writing posts.
Poetry, oh my. Although, I'm not sure if you would consider it poetry at all. I have made another version of this one, but this is the final and finished version.

To say that I am in love would be a lie.
To say that I am completely infatuated with someone I've only known for a short time would be closer to the truth.
I do not want to be possessed by raw emotion.
I do not want these chains on my heart.

So, how do I break these chains?

I cannot cut them or crush them;
They are chains that lie on the plane of the soul.
I cannot ignore them;
Their tug is stronger than the pull of gravity.
I cannot tell the person of my feelings;
Someone else holds her heart in their hands.

I can only wait for another to come and break the chains for me.
Though how long I can wait, I do not know.






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goodbyefriendsiamgone
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commentCommented on: Wed May 28, 2008 @ 03:26am
nice! it came out rly good! whee yay


commentCommented on: Thu May 29, 2008 @ 04:39am
Personally, I highly dislike this one. Even though this is how I truly feel about someone, it's too refined and stiff. Poems should be raw, or at the very least, flow and my poem doesn't do either. Have I told you that I suck at poetry?

Thanks for the comment though!



Shadow of Scribe
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