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Cameron's Poems
Please tell me how I am doing with my poems.
~*Shattered*~
As I sit here in the darkness,
I feel cheated and in pain,
The guy I love I find myself cheating on,
No one to turn to for help because they all shut me out.....

I am shattered in tiny pieces,
Fragile and discusted with myself,
I feel like dying but I pray for good to come,
No help comes to me in this darkness...

I call for help from a friend but she turns me away,
I have to figure this out myself but dont know how,
I am lost in this maze of lies,
Everyone of them calling out to me,
I finally fall to the ground in shame and scream...

I get deeper in the maze then lose myself,
I cannot find the light,
I fall into the darkness, deeper and deeper...

I am laying on the ground in the middle of the maze,
Shattered.....


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  • User Comments: [3]
    ooh thats cool you have to read my sisters though
    http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/?u=1066437

    comment Nylyx · Community Member · Mon Jul 04, 2005 @ 03:37pm
    i read all your poems and they are very beautiful. kept on writing, cause i think you were born to write some great poems

    comment lllllllllljjjjjjjjjjjjjj · Community Member · Sun Sep 25, 2005 @ 06:35pm
    i love it.

    comment Rorschach-x · Community Member · Tue Jun 23, 2009 @ 04:03am
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