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skoulen
Another story...
OCC: ok this is gonna be a seperate story with, for the most part, different ideas behind it but mostly the same characters. If you care to read it you may comment at the end but if you don't read... Keep your opinion to yourself, it's not related to my writings so no one cares, and if you do anyway I'll probably just delete it. with that said I hope you enjoy what I get to write. Note: I may not finish the story I may just write it in parts after I have a chance to think, thank you for understanding. twisted


Christmas


Walking through the thick two or three inches of snow, Skoulen heads into to town to stop for the night and rest. He hears that there is a tavern in town that serves great food and decides to look for it before heading to an inn for the night. Skoulen wanders the streets for at least an hour and decides to stop in at a building that looks like a restraunt to eat and to get away from the cold for a bit. Skoulen walks in the door and sits down in a booth and waits to be served. While he waits he takes off his gloves and jacket placing them next to himself in the booth. He picks up a menu and looks for something he'll like or at least something that's warm.

"Hmm... maybe I'll order the steak... looks a little expensive... I'll just get a burger." skoulen closes the menu and sets it aside. "I wonder when the waiter or waitress is gonna get over here, I'm so hungry?" Skoulen leans out the side of the booth to see if a waiter or waitress is headed his way when he notices that something's out of place. Skoulen leaves his stuff in the booth and stands up then looks around. "Where is everyone?" Skoulen looks around and ponders. {maybe they are in the kitchen...} Skoulen thinks to himself. Skoulen heads to the kitchen door and knocks then opens it slowly. "Hello... is anyone in here? I was just wondering if I could get a quick meal cause I just got into town?" Skoulen peeks around the other side of the door and... BANG! A bullet whizzes by his head barely missing him and Skoulen ducks back behind the door breathing heavily. "s**t!" Skoulen exclaims but in a whispered tone. Skoulen backs away slowly and peeks through the serving window into the kitchen. He sees that the serving staff is tied up on the floor and that there are three men standing in the kitchen with guns.

OCC: ok well that's all I'm writing tonight, I hope you enjoy, and there's more to come soon I promise.


Skoulen starts to breathe heavily and he takes second to collect himself. "It's ok that was close but luckily I dodged that bullet {literally}, what the hell am I supposed to do now?" He sits and listens and reviews his situation. {I should probably call the cops... but that cause more trouble for me... I could always... no I need to find to find someone to help!} "ok let's go!" He slowly and quietly leaves the bar through the front door and searches for a person or people who could help out the staff but the question remained... "Who?"

OCC: just a heads up my character is panicing and talking to himself in a hushed tone but it is verbal not just random thoughts switching between quotes and brackets. This is also where I stop for tonight because it's 12:24am and making good new characters, and I mean good, means I have to come up with ideas. I will try to write more tommorrow though hopefully with at least one new character concept. xp

Skoulen runs to a pay phone nearby and attempts to call the police. After a few minutes he sees that the phone has been torn from the cable. "Heh, that's just great. That's just friggin' PERFECT!" he says while slamming the phone into the glass. His thoughts start to race and then he comes up with what sounds like a good plan. {maybe... I can... talk them into trading the restraunt staff for something... money?... no I barely have that.... maybe me... but how...THAT'S IT!}. He runs out of the phone booth back towards the restraunt. He sneaks in the back door so as not to take a chance, or a bullet, by going through the front door like before.

OCC: ok that's it for now I'll write more later.






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animebaka411
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 22, 2007 @ 09:52am
Way Cool! Keep on writing! biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 27, 2009 @ 01:50am
ohhhhhh what happens next.... i need to know!!!!!



prettyfreakscary
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