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oh my god its been to long sense my last entry of quality and is time for some past-due ranting!!!
ok so i got transfered to english 2 from english 1 and in english one i was just barely getting a start on a book idea thats been in my head for effing ever in the journals that we had( had to have so many of them every month) and just as i got a start on it they effing switched me to two. i hate this class, the teacher sucks, she seriously doesnt know how to teach and she doesnt know the meaning of the word journal. journals are for wrighting down whats on your mind, in her class journals are writing summaries on articles, so out the window goes my chance to write my story. pain in the a** >.<

so then i thought 'hey, gaia has journals...'
but i'll hardly ever really get a chance to write in here because i spend my free times doing other things then just hanging out in my journals, but i might as well give it a chance

so without further delay *drum-roll* my first draft of some fraction of my story
*rifles through her school papers looking for the right one to copy down*
found it!!! ok here goes...

A boy of sixteen lays passed out cold and sopping wet not far from a deserted road in the middle of a forest, about twenty miles from his home in ________.[need to find him a place to live]

Daniel _______[and a last name], a good looking young teen with jet black hair and deep, dark blue eyes, ran away from his friends, his family, his girlfriend, everyone he every cared for. He ran away from it all as far as his legs could carry him. He ran to protect them from himself.

He ran as far as he could, as fast as he could from his home and loved ones to protect them from the thoughts and urges he has been having.

You see he had started having these cravings for something he could not place his finger on. No matter what he did he could not sate this unusual hunger.

He had no idea what to do until an anonymous note arrived from "A Friend"...




i know its kinda cheesy, thats why im looking to you guys to help
also dont expect me to put continuations of this up to very often, im not that great a writer and whenever i actually try my creativity is usually very stunted


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  • User Comments: [6]
    lol why do i get the feeling i've seen this before? idk i might not have just seems familiar to me i even kind of knew where it was going... odd

    comment Tenfen · Community Member · Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 07:21pm
    thats because its very predictable and cleche

    comment Pyrjess · Community Member · Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 11:54pm
    gah i had a thought for another part of it, but to truly understand the idea of it i would need to get drunk

    comment Pyrjess · Community Member · Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 01:50am
    lol that blows I know how you feel. I too also hate my english teacher she has got to be a least 80 years old and cares more about quantity than quality save for one moment in her cr*ppy excistence when she went through all the trouble to change my AIMS score which had been rated by others as a 5 (top score) to a 3 (a little below average) and because of it Im am failing heavily in english. Not a day goes by that I dont want to kill her.

    comment heyohheyohheyfoe · Community Member · Tue Dec 04, 2007 @ 04:18pm
    omg that really sucks, im sorry, why is everyone out to get you?

    comment Pyrjess · Community Member · Tue Dec 04, 2007 @ 05:28pm
    lol I havent looked at your journal in forever sry

    idk probably cause they want me


    comment heyohheyohheyfoe · Community Member · Tue Feb 19, 2008 @ 09:35pm
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