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Chapter 3 FINALLY
A blonde haired boy rose from were the soldire watched.The boy looked 11 or so.He walked slowly towrde the officer and stumbled each time he was jabed in the back."Ya a survivore from that raid?" said the officer,suddenly emmontionles." Answer me!" he yelled as he slaped the boy acrosse the face with the flat part of a sword.Still no response.He was slaped again and again untill he gave in."My name is Inuyaka,age 14.And yes i survived your brutality."The boy grind his teethe as a cold wind blew by threw his flowing hair.The soldiures threw him on the ground and put there swords up to his neck.AS they raised there arms a grey furry shot out of the forest and ripped open ones neck.Blood slid down its raged face and its pear white eyes scorced into the officeres.they stood there watching each other untill the soldiure ran towreds the wolf screeming."FOOL!" yelled the officer.But to late.The wolf doged a attack and slamed a claw into his chest.Now the two lunged at each other.The soldiers tan shirt took the form of dirt under the wolfs imense attacks.Her grey hair flowed ontwards and looked as a moon or the form of water.In 5 miniutes tops the three soldiures lay dead on the tan ground.They wolf took a few steps towardes the boy and then stood.its neck broke and fell backward like a hood and the skin tight legs loosened.A head shot threw the hole and the claws became shoes."I told you so" said a thin girl with onyxe hair.She extended her hand and yanked the boy off the ground."Nows not the time to joke arond mysan" said inuyaka.Sunik then rose and took a few steps toward the group."Sunik age 15.Also a survivor of the raid." He said.Mysan and inuyaka stood frozen there staring at him."Hello they each said as they bow."Finnaly some one friendy" Sunik smiled and walked closer to the group.






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Travelgirl2009
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 18, 2007 @ 08:09pm
wow. there are no words in my vocabulary that can describe what i just read. it was just...wow.


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 18, 2007 @ 11:23pm
Thanx biggrin



snowfire1
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Travelgirl2009
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 20, 2007 @ 12:48am
ur welcome. let me know when you write the next one?


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