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Chapter 1 AWAKANING
Sunik walked limply from his burning town.He fell to the mudy ground and curled into a ball,weeping for the fallen.He gazed in the sky and caught sight of a shooting star.He had never seen one befor and when he did see this one,he had a wiered sensation in his stomach.He pushed off the ground with his mud covered arms and threw himself forward.He fell after four steps and just pushed himself up again.He didnt give up untill he collapsed from agsastuan.He pulled himself under a tree while tears streamed down his cherrey red face.He cried and cried untill finally sleep came.He jurked himself up the next day."White?Why white?" he shook his head and noticed his hunger.He thought off the meat he had in his house.You see,he was a rich child and had top-of-the-class parents.Sunik rolled onto his back and held up a dragon cane.Its mettal was carved by his dad.He yanked the dragons neck and he pulled out the hidden blade.As he stalked into the forest he noticed a soldier camp.blood stained the hard ground.Suniks eyes widened and became pure red.He ran forward and sliced through a lutenit.Gunfire flew towardes him and he just doged them as if he were air.He jumped in the air and whispered one word."Fira" The tents then ignited in a blue flame that spred through the entire camp withought harming the boy.When the fire stopped his eyes settled back to normal.Boy he had a feast!






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Travelgirl2009
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 17, 2007 @ 12:42am
dang. that's pretty good. pm me when u post ur next chapter?


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