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Poem: When it rains-by...Me!
When It Rains

When it rains I look out my window
Watching it pour or watching it sprinkle
As I listen to the rain pounding on my window
I rub a seeing circle on the glass

When it rains I look out that seeing circle
And watch the cars go by in the rain
The sound of thumping on the window
Makes me drowsy and I fall asleep

When it rains I close my eyes
And listen to the thumping on the window
Each thump brings me deeper into sleep
I then awake in the pouring rain

When it rains in my dream I spin in circles with a mouth open wide
When I realize that I can’t feel anything
I stare into the dark, gray clouds
I then kneel on the ground and wish I were awake

I then feel someone nudging me
And then I awake
It is now shining bright through the window
And I get up to go and play

By: Marissa Maury
Username: michiko97
Why i wrote it: It wasn't 'cause it was raining I'll tell you that


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  • User Comments: [2]
    hope u liked it! 3nodding 4laugh 3nodding

    comment xXRawr-GirrXx · Community Member · Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 05:09am
    i liked the poem. ill look and see if i hav a pic of me. but i think i only have old pics from a year or to ago.

    comment therouroni · Community Member · Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 07:33pm
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